I love the game, all the characters are amazing and I want to know a lot more about the world !!!
The story definitely hooks !! Thanks for this great game!
(I think the same that other comments... i just want to date all the characters jajajaja, i will need to play it a couple of times at least when it is finished!)
VN is great, i really enjoyed it. Almost all characters are soo adorable, i want to date them all xD. It's funny that MC charms every character and everyone like him :d
I've been playing your vn a while ago and I can say that it keeps getting better and better. I love all the characters but my heart still belongs to Gran ahahahahaha. Yet Pierre is just...HNNNGGGHHH!!! I'm excited for the next release and keep up the good work~ ^w^
Also I love the new cinematic thingy you've added. Really nice, cool, and neat~ ôwô
oh my. this was a niceeeeee long update. and OOF, I'm torn on who I want to befriend between all of them. I do feel like dark things are in store, and I'll want to run to all of them. :]
Okay, this novel is absolutely marvelous- I love all of the characters here, they all seem generally so cute and lovable... and the story, the writing! All of it is so interesting and awesome! The art is amazing as well! And honestly, I didn't think that you would be a non-native English speaker like me because of how good the grammar is, aside from small grammar mistakes, but I don't mind, when we write we do make quite a lot of mistakes- All the characters are very awesome, so I am excited for the next build! Would be nice to see if the reunion between the MC and his dad will occur and how it would be!
I thought this game was just like the others... But no i really like the story even though it's still unfinished I really like Gran and Norman cause their traits are cool. Welp i would really love to play this game if it's already finished.
I love this update! I'm sad Gran isn't in it as much, but I appreciate you have to introduce us to the other characters as well. I really like the characterisation of the chief, although we didn't get much time with Gran in this build, the time with the chief made up for it!
I have a bad feeling about Pierre though (Oppenheimer name has bad connotations to me...), he seems entirely too smooth not to have an ulterior motive. Time will tell I guess.
Can't wait to find out about the world some more though, and the orb especially! What we've been told so far is very intruiging!
Can't wait for what happens next! Thank you for putting the time in to continue this project!
Okay, it's official, this is my favorite VN in development so far, I can't wait for more.
I just have one suggestion, could you make the MC's dialogue and his thoughts a little more distinguishable? sometimes it's hard to tell if he's talking or thinking.
Besides that everything is perfect, keep it up.
PS: I can help with a Spanish translation if you ever consider it ;)
i can not stop talking about this game this its really killed me i think i want to die by playing this game...pls make more please don't stop make the game i really want to know what happens please do whatever you want that make crazy not knowing what happens next i really want to know what happens and where your comic
hey i havent finished the vn yet but i thought of a rly cool suggestion ( or maybe its just me who think its cool idk) but the part where u get to choose orbs was it? how about the orbs surround u as u choose among them rather than an empty screen? eh? but if u refuse the idea its fine too :> im sure ur quite bz and have other great plans for the game :3
ps:love the game so far ur writing is quite good! its ur own way of writing quite unique than other vn i've played also love the softcore rock ( dunno bout rock in general but idk any other way to describe the music) also love the backgrounds btw everything here is just so chill its rly nice to play :>
Really enjoyed this update! Getting to learn a bit more about the world and its characters was really nice to see. Not to mention our new beau-to-be, Pierre; he's so mysterious and charming, what with the bomb he drops on us. But I really just wanna offer Pierre a glass of water or something because DAMN does he seem thirsty! Seriously, I'm surprised that MC hasn't started noticing a pattern by now!
Joking aside, this new lover-to-be was really fun to interact with and has a very interesting personality that makes him stand out compared to the other characters so far, not to mention that twist he reveals about the MC!I'm really curious to see where this plot thread is going to go; it has me both excited and nervous about what's to come.
Overall, a very well done update, I feel. My only complaint is that Norman's CG is backwards (the dialogue has the hands reverse from the image).
Yeah... that CG scene was a bit of a poor part on my side. I created it after the writings have been done and I mighthave forgotten to flip the image horizontally...
Hope you enjoyed your time reading, thanks for visiting.
"My writing could use some work though" Your writing is good, my only problem is that i felt that the FONT size used in the game is maybe a little bit too small. Despite that great work.
Since this game is still pretty new I wasn't too sure about picking it up just yet, but now that I have I'm really impressed with what's here so far! There isn't a lot in terms of content yet, but what's already here shows a lot of potential!
The story is engaging and strikes a nice balance between serious and lighthearted tones, the characters all feel like three dimensional people with actual personalities and motivations as opposed to 2D cutouts and caricatures of tropes and character traits, the world seems interesting and its lore is dynamically given a little at a time through the dialogue and interactions rather than getting dumped on us all at once. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with this game in the coming builds!
Happy to know that people are liking the direction of where this VN is going! You know, I might actually end up creating some social accounts just for this VN. Just a thought though ;).
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Loving the development. The hardest part is choosing between these smokin dads.
Can't promise that it won't get harder with the last candidate coming in the next build. ;)
Thanks for reading, take care.
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Oh no! You monster! Drowning us in daddies. How will we ever cope? A snorkle?
Might as well get a scuba diving kit with it. ^^
I'd swim that ocean for more topless Gran~ Oof.
It blows my mind how the story progress and enjoy every moment of it..... I am so speechless.. 5 star vn. Confuse a bit at radio part cuz of name.
Thanks for reading. ^^ Is it because you named your character Roger? Hahaha.
Stay safe,
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how can i enter the discord server?
Click the image above with the discord logo, its a hyperlink
Atualmente tem relações românticas ?
Had to translate this one, but currently, there isn't any 'official' romance since I'm just introducing the characters.
Thanks for visiting, take care.
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So... what's the story about?
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Thanks for visiting.
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Guess I really have to find it out myself, huh? :3
Its worth it
Team Norman, all the way!
Got to say I love the writing as well as the art, and the moments feel very real.
Thank you for the compliments. ^^Hope you enjoyed reading through it.
Take care,
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Very good.
Thank you ^^.
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When the dev said that NSFW is coming out in the future,When exactly??because im sooo ready for the nsfw goodies that this story have!
Only time will tell. ;)
Thanks for reading, take care.
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I love the game, all the characters are amazing and I want to know a lot more about the world !!!
The story definitely hooks !! Thanks for this great game!
(I think the same that other comments... i just want to date all the characters jajajaja, i will need to play it a couple of times at least when it is finished!)
Thanks for playing. ^^
Take care,
-D
Love the VN very much, all the characters are all so lovable (help I want to date them all)
Curious where the story will go, very excited for new updates that might add to the lore!
Thank you for playing the latest build. ^^
Stay safe,
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love this so far the characters are all lovable
Thank you for playing. ^^
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VN is great, i really enjoyed it. Almost all characters are soo adorable, i want to date them all xD. It's funny that MC charms every character and everyone like him :d
Looking forward for new updates!
The MC is quite a charmer isn't he? ^^
Thanks for reading,
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I've been playing your vn a while ago and I can say that it keeps getting better and better. I love all the characters but my heart still belongs to Gran ahahahahaha. Yet Pierre is just...HNNNGGGHHH!!! I'm excited for the next release and keep up the good work~ ^w^
Also I love the new cinematic thingy you've added. Really nice, cool, and neat~ ôwô
Thank you for your continued support and for the feedback. ^^
Stay safe,
-D
Noww.. Gettin the vibe feelin of 50 shades of grey if u pick the lion xD . I wonder.......
Hmmm Indeed...
Thanks for reading, stay safe. ^^
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oh my. this was a niceeeeee long update. and OOF, I'm torn on who I want to befriend between all of them. I do feel like dark things are in store, and I'll want to run to all of them. :]
Who knows, right? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Thanks for reading, stay safe.
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Okay, this novel is absolutely marvelous-
I love all of the characters here, they all seem generally so cute and lovable... and the story, the writing! All of it is so interesting and awesome! The art is amazing as well!
And honestly, I didn't think that you would be a non-native English speaker like me because of how good the grammar is, aside from small grammar mistakes, but I don't mind, when we write we do make quite a lot of mistakes-
All the characters are very awesome, so I am excited for the next build! Would be nice to see if the reunion between the MC and his dad will occur and how it would be!
Thank you for your compliments. ^^ I hope you had a decent time reading the VN.
Stay safe,
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Hopefully, one day it will be finished. For now, thank you for reading this month's build. ^^
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I love this update! I'm sad Gran isn't in it as much, but I appreciate you have to introduce us to the other characters as well. I really like the characterisation of the chief, although we didn't get much time with Gran in this build, the time with the chief made up for it!
I have a bad feeling about Pierre though (Oppenheimer name has bad connotations to me...), he seems entirely too smooth not to have an ulterior motive. Time will tell I guess.
Can't wait to find out about the world some more though, and the orb especially! What we've been told so far is very intruiging!
Can't wait for what happens next! Thank you for putting the time in to continue this project!
Gran will come back don't worry. ;)
Thank you for reading this build, ^^
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Okay, it's official, this is my favorite VN in development so far, I can't wait for more.
I just have one suggestion, could you make the MC's dialogue and his thoughts a little more distinguishable? sometimes it's hard to tell if he's talking or thinking.
Besides that everything is perfect, keep it up.
PS: I can help with a Spanish translation if you ever consider it ;)
Thank you for reading the VN and the feedback. I'll see what I can do to make them more distinguishable in the future. ^^
Cheers,
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The writing here is top-notch, I really like the characterization a lot!
I got a bunch of feels while reading this ;_;
Keep the up great work! Looking forward to what comes next (:
Thank you for the compliment ^^. Not sure if my writing is really top-notch as you have said... But thank you regardless.
Thanks for reading.
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i can not stop talking about this game this its really killed me i think i want to die by playing this game...pls make more please don't stop make the game i really want to know what happens please do whatever you want that make crazy not knowing what happens next i really want to know what happens and where your comic
The comic is shared in my Discord. Feel free to join. ^^
Pierre is so cute! I'm glad we can pursue him. Looking forward to the next update! Especially after that bombshell that was dropped before it ended
Thank you for reading! ^^
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oh my god i love it pls more of it ... specially love the polar bear in the lion blushing there are so cute and handsome as hell
They're a handsome bunch aren't they?
Thanks for playing,
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What has been updated? Bug fixes?
Just some backdoor stuff. Don't worry about it. ^^
Should I re-download?
You don't have to if you've already played it.
OK. 👍
Loved the new update. Keep it up!! ;)
Thank you. I'll try ^^
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hey i havent finished the vn yet but i thought of a rly cool suggestion ( or maybe its just me who think its cool idk) but the part where u get to choose orbs was it? how about the orbs surround u as u choose among them rather than an empty screen? eh? but if u refuse the idea its fine too :> im sure ur quite bz and have other great plans for the game :3
ps:love the game so far ur writing is quite good! its ur own way of writing quite unique than other vn i've played also love the softcore rock ( dunno bout rock in general but idk any other way to describe the music) also love the backgrounds btw everything here is just so chill its rly nice to play :>
Thank you for testing it out!
-D
:>
Really enjoyed this update! Getting to learn a bit more about the world and its characters was really nice to see. Not to mention our new beau-to-be, Pierre; he's so mysterious and charming, what with the bomb he drops on us. But I really just wanna offer Pierre a glass of water or something because DAMN does he seem thirsty! Seriously, I'm surprised that MC hasn't started noticing a pattern by now!
Joking aside, this new lover-to-be was really fun to interact with and has a very interesting personality that makes him stand out compared to the other characters so far, not to mention that twist he reveals about the MC!I'm really curious to see where this plot thread is going to go; it has me both excited and nervous about what's to come.
Overall, a very well done update, I feel. My only complaint is that Norman's CG is backwards (the dialogue has the hands reverse from the image).
Yeah... that CG scene was a bit of a poor part on my side. I created it after the writings have been done and I might have forgotten to flip the image horizontally...
Hope you enjoyed your time reading, thanks for visiting.
-D
Subtlety isn't Pierre's forte, is it? At least where the MC is concerned. Still I preffer Norman, Gran and Dave...
Thanks for reading!
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Please tell me Norman and Dave will be dateable too, God they are so sweet <3.
I missed Gran a lot though :(
What an awesome update! keep up the good work!
Yes. Norman and Dave will be date-able candidates. Don't worry you'll see Gran soon too. ;)
Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for the update, just what to know is Pierre one of dateable or not just want to know.
He is. :)
Thanks for playing,
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"My writing could use some work though" Your writing is good, my only problem is that i felt that the FONT size used in the game is maybe a little bit too small. Despite that great work.
Thanks for your feedback, seems like people are still struggling with the the font size ^^'.
Stay safe,
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SPOILER ALERT
As soon as Gran and Dave offered to go to the police station I knew the main character would end up arrested unfairly...
I enjoyed this update so much, the story gets more and more interesting with every update, I can't wait for the next update! :3
Thank you. New update will be up soon. ^^
Stay safe,
-D
I loved this game and your art is very cool!! please continue when you can, i would like nsfw content for this vn, it would be really nice :)
Thank you for your feedback!
Thanks for testing it out.
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I've really loved it so far! Gran is such a lovable dumb big boy, I'd love to see how his route goes hahaha! Keep the awesome work!
Btw, do you plan on adding NSFW content in the future?
Yes, a lot of people have voted and it seems that they'd enjoy some NSFW contents.
Thanks for playing.
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Since this game is still pretty new I wasn't too sure about picking it up just yet, but now that I have I'm really impressed with what's here so far! There isn't a lot in terms of content yet, but what's already here shows a lot of potential!
The story is engaging and strikes a nice balance between serious and lighthearted tones, the characters all feel like three dimensional people with actual personalities and motivations as opposed to 2D cutouts and caricatures of tropes and character traits, the world seems interesting and its lore is dynamically given a little at a time through the dialogue and interactions rather than getting dumped on us all at once. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with this game in the coming builds!
I'm glad that you were able to enjoy reading through the VN. I've put quite a lot of effort in writing it ^^.
Thanks for visiting.
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The story seems very interesting, and the appearance of Gran just hit my point. I definitely love those furry and strong tigers :)
Expecting to see this game on Steam someday!
Who knows right? ^^
Thanks for playing!
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Just a heads up, I made a new discord server for this VN. Feel free to join or not ^^.
Link: https://discord.gg/qcCZnRS
Stay safe.
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Will there be like a 30-day system like most vns or is it just a freestyle?
Hmm, I'm not sure honestly but who knows? ;)
Thanks for playing,
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I love new udpate. I really like this plot twist "YoU aRe UnDeR aReSt" brilliant. Oh and yes I'd love this vn to have nsfw content.
Stay save, and till next time.👋😍
Thanks for playing, but please keep the comments spoiler free ^^'
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Love the art, love the story, love the characters, love the pace. Keep going!
Do you have any official page other than itchio to follow? Twitter/patreon/art account/whatever?
Edit: I noticed from your previous answers you don't have any yet. Tho, if things change let us know!
Happy to know that people are liking the direction of where this VN is going! You know, I might actually end up creating some social accounts just for this VN. Just a thought though ;).
Thanks for playing,
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