oh my. this was a niceeeeee long update. and OOF, I'm torn on who I want to befriend between all of them. I do feel like dark things are in store, and I'll want to run to all of them. :]
Okay, this novel is absolutely marvelous- I love all of the characters here, they all seem generally so cute and lovable... and the story, the writing! All of it is so interesting and awesome! The art is amazing as well! And honestly, I didn't think that you would be a non-native English speaker like me because of how good the grammar is, aside from small grammar mistakes, but I don't mind, when we write we do make quite a lot of mistakes- All the characters are very awesome, so I am excited for the next build! Would be nice to see if the reunion between the MC and his dad will occur and how it would be!
I thought this game was just like the others... But no i really like the story even though it's still unfinished I really like Gran and Norman cause their traits are cool. Welp i would really love to play this game if it's already finished.
I love this update! I'm sad Gran isn't in it as much, but I appreciate you have to introduce us to the other characters as well. I really like the characterisation of the chief, although we didn't get much time with Gran in this build, the time with the chief made up for it!
I have a bad feeling about Pierre though (Oppenheimer name has bad connotations to me...), he seems entirely too smooth not to have an ulterior motive. Time will tell I guess.
Can't wait to find out about the world some more though, and the orb especially! What we've been told so far is very intruiging!
Can't wait for what happens next! Thank you for putting the time in to continue this project!
Okay, it's official, this is my favorite VN in development so far, I can't wait for more.
I just have one suggestion, could you make the MC's dialogue and his thoughts a little more distinguishable? sometimes it's hard to tell if he's talking or thinking.
Besides that everything is perfect, keep it up.
PS: I can help with a Spanish translation if you ever consider it ;)
i can not stop talking about this game this its really killed me i think i want to die by playing this game...pls make more please don't stop make the game i really want to know what happens please do whatever you want that make crazy not knowing what happens next i really want to know what happens and where your comic
hey i havent finished the vn yet but i thought of a rly cool suggestion ( or maybe its just me who think its cool idk) but the part where u get to choose orbs was it? how about the orbs surround u as u choose among them rather than an empty screen? eh? but if u refuse the idea its fine too :> im sure ur quite bz and have other great plans for the game :3
ps:love the game so far ur writing is quite good! its ur own way of writing quite unique than other vn i've played also love the softcore rock ( dunno bout rock in general but idk any other way to describe the music) also love the backgrounds btw everything here is just so chill its rly nice to play :>
Really enjoyed this update! Getting to learn a bit more about the world and its characters was really nice to see. Not to mention our new beau-to-be, Pierre; he's so mysterious and charming, what with the bomb he drops on us. But I really just wanna offer Pierre a glass of water or something because DAMN does he seem thirsty! Seriously, I'm surprised that MC hasn't started noticing a pattern by now!
Joking aside, this new lover-to-be was really fun to interact with and has a very interesting personality that makes him stand out compared to the other characters so far, not to mention that twist he reveals about the MC!I'm really curious to see where this plot thread is going to go; it has me both excited and nervous about what's to come.
Overall, a very well done update, I feel. My only complaint is that Norman's CG is backwards (the dialogue has the hands reverse from the image).
Yeah... that CG scene was a bit of a poor part on my side. I created it after the writings have been done and I mighthave forgotten to flip the image horizontally...
Hope you enjoyed your time reading, thanks for visiting.
"My writing could use some work though" Your writing is good, my only problem is that i felt that the FONT size used in the game is maybe a little bit too small. Despite that great work.
Since this game is still pretty new I wasn't too sure about picking it up just yet, but now that I have I'm really impressed with what's here so far! There isn't a lot in terms of content yet, but what's already here shows a lot of potential!
The story is engaging and strikes a nice balance between serious and lighthearted tones, the characters all feel like three dimensional people with actual personalities and motivations as opposed to 2D cutouts and caricatures of tropes and character traits, the world seems interesting and its lore is dynamically given a little at a time through the dialogue and interactions rather than getting dumped on us all at once. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with this game in the coming builds!
Happy to know that people are liking the direction of where this VN is going! You know, I might actually end up creating some social accounts just for this VN. Just a thought though ;).
Hello there Drakes sorry for my bad inglish, I loved your vn and I love Gran, he is a great company and his personality is very nice, and he is cute xd.
I'm liking the story and I'm really enjoying reading it and thanks for correcting the lyrics for the android version, now it's much easier to read, by the way the girl is worth gold, the end left me: what did I do now to be you now hmm... spoiler sorry, and for him To top it off, I'm going to cut it here and bingo xd, I hope you continue with this, I'll be waiting for the next update.
Don't worry about your English bud, I can understand it just fine. It's the thought that matters right? Glad that you enjoyed reading through the VN and that I was able to help you!
I love it! Your art is cool, and about nsfw I want this vn to have it. That would be nice! and..I want it to have gallery in the main menu so I can watch them anytime. >:D
I already spellchecked as much as I could, although some might have slipped the crack. Could you list me the ones that you've spotted if you can? It'd be a great help. (This novel is written in UK English so there are a couple of spelling differences.)
Well, I don't exactly have a fixed schedule although my aim is to at least upload an update every month. More than that really depends on my mood and time ^^.
First of all, when Dave is bringing breakfast there is an error that almost made me choke, lmao, there's like a " Happy dave image not found " that just flies up and down on the left side of the screen, it's silly but it was so funny idk why. Next, when the MC said " A serious and gentle dragon " I WAS LIKE " INDEEEEED " and he's so cute cleaning i want to help him moooooore, and i would very much appreciate nsfw, the backgrounds ? Beautiful !! The animations ? Purrrrfect !! Kinda sad about the ending of the update though, I'M TOO YOUNG, I DIDN'T EVEN GOT TO CHOOSE DAVE'S ROUTE DIRECTLY ; -;, *cough cough* Tell him... I liked the eggons.... Aaaaaanyway, wonderful update, bravo, will be waiting for more and more.
AND ONE DAY, IT MAY NOT BE TODAY, MAY NOT BE TOMORROW, BUT ONE DAY MY GREEN ORB WILL SHINE.
Keep up the amazing work <3
Oh, of course, the new characters are just nhaaa, like, i want to hug every single one of them, sally is cute, Norman is, he he, Norman, and Jacob & Steve what a cute couple. My god this is taking long, but for a good reason, it was a good update after all u.u, now i have to farm coins in fall guys CAUSE I NEED THAT DRAGON SKIN.
Really good work so far, can't wait to see what's next! And honestly, your English is really good for it being (what I presume is) your 2nd language, kudos to you :). Just some really minor things here and there, If you ever make a typo sheet I would love to help by submitting the errors I find there.
Well looks like you're in luck, I've just released a new update ^^. English is my second language and I'll consider creating a typo sheet if it would help everyone be able to enjoy the VN more.
I really love it so far! You've got absolutely the perfect pacing without the two-hour information dump that other games have. I'm always eager to see what's next.
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Noww.. Gettin the vibe feelin of 50 shades of grey if u pick the lion xD . I wonder.......
Hmmm Indeed...
Thanks for reading, stay safe. ^^
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oh my. this was a niceeeeee long update. and OOF, I'm torn on who I want to befriend between all of them. I do feel like dark things are in store, and I'll want to run to all of them. :]
Who knows, right? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Thanks for reading, stay safe.
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Okay, this novel is absolutely marvelous-
I love all of the characters here, they all seem generally so cute and lovable... and the story, the writing! All of it is so interesting and awesome! The art is amazing as well!
And honestly, I didn't think that you would be a non-native English speaker like me because of how good the grammar is, aside from small grammar mistakes, but I don't mind, when we write we do make quite a lot of mistakes-
All the characters are very awesome, so I am excited for the next build! Would be nice to see if the reunion between the MC and his dad will occur and how it would be!
Thank you for your compliments. ^^ I hope you had a decent time reading the VN.
Stay safe,
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Hopefully, one day it will be finished. For now, thank you for reading this month's build. ^^
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I love this update! I'm sad Gran isn't in it as much, but I appreciate you have to introduce us to the other characters as well. I really like the characterisation of the chief, although we didn't get much time with Gran in this build, the time with the chief made up for it!
I have a bad feeling about Pierre though (Oppenheimer name has bad connotations to me...), he seems entirely too smooth not to have an ulterior motive. Time will tell I guess.
Can't wait to find out about the world some more though, and the orb especially! What we've been told so far is very intruiging!
Can't wait for what happens next! Thank you for putting the time in to continue this project!
Gran will come back don't worry. ;)
Thank you for reading this build, ^^
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Okay, it's official, this is my favorite VN in development so far, I can't wait for more.
I just have one suggestion, could you make the MC's dialogue and his thoughts a little more distinguishable? sometimes it's hard to tell if he's talking or thinking.
Besides that everything is perfect, keep it up.
PS: I can help with a Spanish translation if you ever consider it ;)
Thank you for reading the VN and the feedback. I'll see what I can do to make them more distinguishable in the future. ^^
Cheers,
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The writing here is top-notch, I really like the characterization a lot!
I got a bunch of feels while reading this ;_;
Keep the up great work! Looking forward to what comes next (:
Thank you for the compliment ^^. Not sure if my writing is really top-notch as you have said... But thank you regardless.
Thanks for reading.
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i can not stop talking about this game this its really killed me i think i want to die by playing this game...pls make more please don't stop make the game i really want to know what happens please do whatever you want that make crazy not knowing what happens next i really want to know what happens and where your comic
The comic is shared in my Discord. Feel free to join. ^^
Pierre is so cute! I'm glad we can pursue him. Looking forward to the next update! Especially after that bombshell that was dropped before it ended
Thank you for reading! ^^
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oh my god i love it pls more of it ... specially love the polar bear in the lion blushing there are so cute and handsome as hell
They're a handsome bunch aren't they?
Thanks for playing,
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What has been updated? Bug fixes?
Just some backdoor stuff. Don't worry about it. ^^
Should I re-download?
You don't have to if you've already played it.
OK. 👍
Loved the new update. Keep it up!! ;)
Thank you. I'll try ^^
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hey i havent finished the vn yet but i thought of a rly cool suggestion ( or maybe its just me who think its cool idk) but the part where u get to choose orbs was it? how about the orbs surround u as u choose among them rather than an empty screen? eh? but if u refuse the idea its fine too :> im sure ur quite bz and have other great plans for the game :3
ps:love the game so far ur writing is quite good! its ur own way of writing quite unique than other vn i've played also love the softcore rock ( dunno bout rock in general but idk any other way to describe the music) also love the backgrounds btw everything here is just so chill its rly nice to play :>
Thank you for testing it out!
-D
:>
Really enjoyed this update! Getting to learn a bit more about the world and its characters was really nice to see. Not to mention our new beau-to-be, Pierre; he's so mysterious and charming, what with the bomb he drops on us. But I really just wanna offer Pierre a glass of water or something because DAMN does he seem thirsty! Seriously, I'm surprised that MC hasn't started noticing a pattern by now!
Joking aside, this new lover-to-be was really fun to interact with and has a very interesting personality that makes him stand out compared to the other characters so far, not to mention that twist he reveals about the MC!I'm really curious to see where this plot thread is going to go; it has me both excited and nervous about what's to come.
Overall, a very well done update, I feel. My only complaint is that Norman's CG is backwards (the dialogue has the hands reverse from the image).
Yeah... that CG scene was a bit of a poor part on my side. I created it after the writings have been done and I might have forgotten to flip the image horizontally...
Hope you enjoyed your time reading, thanks for visiting.
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Subtlety isn't Pierre's forte, is it? At least where the MC is concerned. Still I preffer Norman, Gran and Dave...
Thanks for reading!
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Please tell me Norman and Dave will be dateable too, God they are so sweet <3.
I missed Gran a lot though :(
What an awesome update! keep up the good work!
Yes. Norman and Dave will be date-able candidates. Don't worry you'll see Gran soon too. ;)
Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for the update, just what to know is Pierre one of dateable or not just want to know.
He is. :)
Thanks for playing,
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"My writing could use some work though" Your writing is good, my only problem is that i felt that the FONT size used in the game is maybe a little bit too small. Despite that great work.
Thanks for your feedback, seems like people are still struggling with the the font size ^^'.
Stay safe,
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SPOILER ALERT
As soon as Gran and Dave offered to go to the police station I knew the main character would end up arrested unfairly...
I enjoyed this update so much, the story gets more and more interesting with every update, I can't wait for the next update! :3
Thank you. New update will be up soon. ^^
Stay safe,
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I loved this game and your art is very cool!! please continue when you can, i would like nsfw content for this vn, it would be really nice :)
Thank you for your feedback!
Thanks for testing it out.
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I've really loved it so far! Gran is such a lovable dumb big boy, I'd love to see how his route goes hahaha! Keep the awesome work!
Btw, do you plan on adding NSFW content in the future?
Yes, a lot of people have voted and it seems that they'd enjoy some NSFW contents.
Thanks for playing.
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Since this game is still pretty new I wasn't too sure about picking it up just yet, but now that I have I'm really impressed with what's here so far! There isn't a lot in terms of content yet, but what's already here shows a lot of potential!
The story is engaging and strikes a nice balance between serious and lighthearted tones, the characters all feel like three dimensional people with actual personalities and motivations as opposed to 2D cutouts and caricatures of tropes and character traits, the world seems interesting and its lore is dynamically given a little at a time through the dialogue and interactions rather than getting dumped on us all at once. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with this game in the coming builds!
I'm glad that you were able to enjoy reading through the VN. I've put quite a lot of effort in writing it ^^.
Thanks for visiting.
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The story seems very interesting, and the appearance of Gran just hit my point. I definitely love those furry and strong tigers :)
Expecting to see this game on Steam someday!
Who knows right? ^^
Thanks for playing!
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Just a heads up, I made a new discord server for this VN. Feel free to join or not ^^.
Link: https://discord.gg/qcCZnRS
Stay safe.
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Will there be like a 30-day system like most vns or is it just a freestyle?
Hmm, I'm not sure honestly but who knows? ;)
Thanks for playing,
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I love new udpate. I really like this plot twist "YoU aRe UnDeR aReSt" brilliant. Oh and yes I'd love this vn to have nsfw content.
Stay save, and till next time.👋😍
Thanks for playing, but please keep the comments spoiler free ^^'
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Love the art, love the story, love the characters, love the pace. Keep going!
Do you have any official page other than itchio to follow? Twitter/patreon/art account/whatever?
Edit: I noticed from your previous answers you don't have any yet. Tho, if things change let us know!
Happy to know that people are liking the direction of where this VN is going! You know, I might actually end up creating some social accounts just for this VN. Just a thought though ;).
Thanks for playing,
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Hello there Drakes sorry for my bad inglish, I loved your vn and I love Gran, he is a great company and his personality is very nice, and he is cute xd.
I'm liking the story and I'm really enjoying reading it and thanks for correcting the lyrics for the android version, now it's much easier to read, by the way the girl is worth gold, the end left me: what did I do now to be you now hmm... spoiler sorry, and for him To top it off, I'm going to cut it here and bingo xd, I hope you continue with this, I'll be waiting for the next update.
PD: and yes SNFW plis, don't think bad of me xd
Don't worry about your English bud, I can understand it just fine. It's the thought that matters right? Glad that you enjoyed reading through the VN and that I was able to help you!
Cheers and have a nice day.
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I love it! Your art is cool, and about nsfw I want this vn to have it. That would be nice! and..I want it to have gallery in the main menu so I can watch them anytime. >:D
Haha, Thanks for playing.
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OMG I love this! Gran is such a lovable goof. To answer the question on the afterword of the current build, yes. Adult scenes please OwO
Thank you for playing!
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one word: spellcheck
I already spellchecked as much as I could, although some might have slipped the crack. Could you list me the ones that you've spotted if you can? It'd be a great help. (This novel is written in UK English so there are a couple of spelling differences.)
Thanks for checking the VN out.
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Demm, The Freakin' Cliff Hanger Tho huhu. NICE NICE NICE Work!!! Looking forward for an update :>
Thanks for playing! ^^
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Hey just wanted to ask if you have an update schedule
Well, I don't exactly have a fixed schedule although my aim is to at least upload an update every month. More than that really depends on my mood and time ^^.
i love the new characters in the update !
keep up the good work d !! <333
Thank you. I'll try to keep it up ^^
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Wow, really enjoyed this! I love all the characters introduced so far, Gran most of all!
Very intrigued to see what the orb means and where the story's going next
Also, do you have a social media we can follow?
Thank you for playing! Yes, I do have socials but they're for private use so I can't really share them. Sorry!
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That's no worries, I just like following authors on twitter so they can post updates and progress so I'm not always checking itch
Can't wait to see the next update!
love this game
Thanks for playing!
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Oh yeah, the new update is amaaaaazing
First of all, when Dave is bringing breakfast there is an error that almost made me choke, lmao, there's like a " Happy dave image not found " that just flies up and down on the left side of the screen, it's silly but it was so funny idk why. Next, when the MC said " A serious and gentle dragon " I WAS LIKE " INDEEEEED " and he's so cute cleaning i want to help him moooooore, and i would very much appreciate nsfw, the backgrounds ? Beautiful !! The animations ? Purrrrfect !! Kinda sad about the ending of the update though, I'M TOO YOUNG, I DIDN'T EVEN GOT TO CHOOSE DAVE'S ROUTE DIRECTLY ; -;, *cough cough* Tell him... I liked the eggons.... Aaaaaanyway, wonderful update, bravo, will be waiting for more and more.
AND ONE DAY, IT MAY NOT BE TODAY, MAY NOT BE TOMORROW, BUT ONE DAY MY GREEN ORB WILL SHINE.
Keep up the amazing work <3
Oh, of course, the new characters are just nhaaa, like, i want to hug every single one of them, sally is cute, Norman is, he he, Norman, and Jacob & Steve what a cute couple. My god this is taking long, but for a good reason, it was a good update after all u.u, now i have to farm coins in fall guys CAUSE I NEED THAT DRAGON SKIN.
Ah dang, looks like I overlooked that bit... Thanks for mentioning to me, I'm gonna go ahead and re-upload the files before I forget.
Thank you for your continued support, I hope you had a fun time playing!
Stay safe and cheers.
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Drakes feeding us more content TwT
Y'all should stan Drakes!!!!!
Enjoy and thanks for playing!
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Really good work so far, can't wait to see what's next! And honestly, your
English is really good for it being (what I presume is) your 2nd language, kudos to you :). Just some really minor things here and there, If you ever make a typo sheet I would love to help by submitting the errors I find there.
Well looks like you're in luck, I've just released a new update ^^. English is my second language and I'll consider creating a typo sheet if it would help everyone be able to enjoy the VN more.
Thanks for playing, have a nice day!
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I really love it so far! You've got absolutely the perfect pacing without the two-hour information dump that other games have. I'm always eager to see what's next.
Thank you for your compliments!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
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