Seeing as how it just recently split routes, will you be doing one route at a time or all five simultaneously? One at a time does offer a more focused approach to readers, not having to wait five months for each route to cycle through, whilst also keeping a sense of mystery for the other routes, though it also makes it more difficult to try and overlap each route together without spending too much time unless each routes are entirely different, and other routes will have to wait a long time for their turn. Simultaneous updates gives more versatile options in development since you can refine and/or tie each route together more thoroughly as the story progresses with each update cycles, and also gives the reader a broader sense of the story in all angles, though it takes more time for it to progress in five month intervals.
Nevertheless it's all up to you. No matter your choice, a fervent reader can always wait no matter how long, just to read a well written and juicy story ʕ ꈍᴥꈍʔ
Dialogue does feel a bit unnecessarily lengthy at times with awkward overfamiliarity imo but other than that I'm quite eager to see what their future awaits as the story unfolds 👀
Thank you for taking the time to write a feedback! I really appreciate it. I've planned to go over the earlier scenes and maybe do a bit of reworking here and there to try and make things go smoother in a way. Fix grammar issues and etc while I'm at it. For now, I'll be releasing the first days of every available route first then perhaps, afterwards...
As for the routes, I'm planning on doing all five simultaneously. The reason being is that the story kinda goes hand in hand with each other, and if I focus on only one route, then the storyline will be somewhat spoiled for the other routes. (Don't quote me on this though, things are prone to change. ^^')
I just typed this and waited to see what would happen and wadda you know a lot of people joined it I laughed so hard even harder when I saw Grunt steel join.
This game just keeps getting better and better <3 Noice! And 5 routes :o Def took a lot of time to write. And ur amazing Drakes, keep up the good works<3 Wish I can see Gran old hair :( He looks good with it
Some, yes. In our country it's illegal to take your shirt off in public. Especially at curfew and where children are present. Nobody wants to see them pecs.
Also it goes on to show the rest of the lines as if I had chosen the red as well. Might be more than a judging by the fact it goes on to say how it made your character feel like you chose the red and then that it turned into the normal red one. This all happened after it said the blue one turned normal in your palm. May have a coding error, which leads to having the red regardless when you chose that one.
Any news when the next update is coming? No rush or pressure btw, I know this is a lot of work! Just curious because I am excited and love this game lol.
Hey Drakes I want ask if it is ok to color one of your CG and send u or something? I really liked your vn and I want to try to help u a little bit even if u will reject the final efect I wouldn't mind :) If you don't want me to do that I just won't do that. Thanks for answer! :)
Sure! Feel free to colour it in. I can't promise that I'll be using it but who knows, right? Be sure to send me over the DM in discord if you've decided to. ^^
Ok! Thank you for reply! Im not too good to drawing backgrounds but I will try my best! Im still learning >,< u are acually first one who im gonna colour/draw something for someone ;D
Hey i have a small question about instaklling the new update- im on a windows pc and after downloading the 1.05 and extracting the .zip, then putting it in the game folder i have for limits, i tried loading m y save from the last version since i didnt finish it before the update and it said an exception has occured or error- and now its making me restart everything with no skip option- im gonna try re downloading it but please help!
Hello, due to the early development of the builds, Save files aren't guaranteed to survive after passing build. (I try to make sure that it stays working.) If you go to 'Preferences' and under the Skip column, select 'Unseen Texts' and you should then be able to skip forward.
Look, I'm absolutely SIMPing Piere with every fiber of my being, I have no shame in that, but I would still like to call him out for moving-the-goalpost on giving MC info about his dad. Seriously, he keeps brining up that MC is the "Son of Yorke" and going out of his way to bring up dad, but then refuses to share any of the information we actually want to know...
He's super wishy-washy on whether or not he can actually talk about MC's dad or not! First, he brings up MC's dad and even shows us a picture of him, citing that he's certain that we are the "Son of Yorke" after having met us, then turns around and says he can't say anything more because we aren't "VeRiFiEd" as his son; then, the following day, he continues to bring up MC's dad and dangling the promise of information in front of his face after the DNA test, only to switch gears and say that he "ThInKs It Is StIlL tOo EaRlY fOr ThAt" and "HaS tO aSk HiS sUpErIoRs" before he can tell us anything once we actually have the DNA verification. That's all kinds of suspicious, to me... =_= (...even if he is attractive...)
On a less exasperated note, Roderick is absolutely adorable and the goodest of boys! That little "wruff" he does is really cute; my childhood dog would do the same thing whenever she didn't want to do something, like a little puppy tantrum. What I'm saying is, though I'm a total SIMP for Piere, I would protect Roderick with my life! And you can quote me on that!
Great work, as always! Looking forward to the next build already!
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Enjoyed what I've read so far 🤸💖
Seeing as how it just recently split routes, will you be doing one route at a time or all five simultaneously? One at a time does offer a more focused approach to readers, not having to wait five months for each route to cycle through, whilst also keeping a sense of mystery for the other routes, though it also makes it more difficult to try and overlap each route together without spending too much time unless each routes are entirely different, and other routes will have to wait a long time for their turn. Simultaneous updates gives more versatile options in development since you can refine and/or tie each route together more thoroughly as the story progresses with each update cycles, and also gives the reader a broader sense of the story in all angles, though it takes more time for it to progress in five month intervals.
Nevertheless it's all up to you. No matter your choice, a fervent reader can always wait no matter how long, just to read a well written and juicy story ʕ ꈍᴥꈍʔ
Dialogue does feel a bit unnecessarily lengthy at times with awkward overfamiliarity imo but other than that I'm quite eager to see what their future awaits as the story unfolds 👀
Thank you for taking the time to write a feedback! I really appreciate it. I've planned to go over the earlier scenes and maybe do a bit of reworking here and there to try and make things go smoother in a way. Fix grammar issues and etc while I'm at it. For now, I'll be releasing the first days of every available route first then perhaps, afterwards...
As for the routes, I'm planning on doing all five simultaneously. The reason being is that the story kinda goes hand in hand with each other, and if I focus on only one route, then the storyline will be somewhat spoiled for the other routes. (Don't quote me on this though, things are prone to change. ^^')
Thanks for reading, take care.
-D
I see. Simultaneous would be the better option here if that is the case. Which I'd still be willing to wait to witness their days... afterwards 👀
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I just typed this and waited to see what would happen and wadda you know a lot of people joined it I laughed so hard even harder when I saw Grunt steel join.
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Is there any finished routes of the game?
Not yet, as it's still on early stages. The routes are just branching out in the last update.
This game just keeps getting better and better <3 Noice! And 5 routes :o Def took a lot of time to write. And ur amazing Drakes, keep up the good works<3 Wish I can see Gran old hair :( He looks good with it
I wonder what it's like to live a life where it's a harem.
Probably would feel overwhelming and fake if anything.
Full of heartbreak and broken hopes.
Hm, is it abnormal to be shirtless in public where you live? I don't really get why the characters made such a big deal out of it.
Some, yes. In our country it's illegal to take your shirt off in public. Especially at curfew and where children are present. Nobody wants to see them pecs.
...Wow. Growing up I had a hard time finding anyone with a shirt *on* most summers.
Loving the updates so far, fantastic job on this whole VN. c:
If I may ask, who is planned to have a route?
Thinking of a particular wolf in mind...The 5 casts presented in the select screen.
Thanks for playing the build, take care. ^^
-D
Thank you for the reply! ^_^ And you too!
God damn that goofball... Can't wait for more!
If Gran's not the one waking me up in the mornin' I'm not breathing.
Finally a new update, thanks drakes cause I love your VN so much, I enjoy reading every word, keep up the good work :3
I chose the blue orb and right after saying that it turned into a normal one just sitting in my palm it said this and goes to saying I had a red one.
Seems to be a bit of a typo. Thanks for the heads up.
-D
Also it goes on to show the rest of the lines as if I had chosen the red as well. Might be more than a judging by the fact it goes on to say how it made your character feel like you chose the red and then that it turned into the normal red one. This all happened after it said the blue one turned normal in your palm. May have a coding error, which leads to having the red regardless when you chose that one.
About the routes : are you going to finish gran and then move to the next one or are you going to do them simultaneously?
Loved the update btw keep it up !!
Hey, I'm planning to do them simultaneously. ^^ If it proves to be ineffective, I'll narrow it down to a couple ROs first.
Thanks for playing, take care.
-D
if you guys are trying to find the title screen song it called : beautiful dream by Diego Nava
Loved the new update for Gran...so cute!!!...hope to see more from you, Drakes...Good luck!
What is the title of soundtrack in the main menu?
What is the title of the song that plays when you ride with Gran on his motorcycle?
Nice update i love how the day end
Spoiler alert!
Even though the mc was dreaming gran giving him a kiss wish that was real but that would be too early for them
ive tried everything and cant seem to get any route other then gran ;v; help TvT idk what to do
I think. This update is only for gran
Gran only for now! The rest will be updated later.
Thanks for playing.
-D
mhm! your game is great so far ^w^
Any news when the next update is coming? No rush or pressure btw, I know this is a lot of work! Just curious because I am excited and love this game lol.
You can scroll down a bit and find Drake's comment that it will be delayed a few days
Norman always the best man.
And Pierre is closeDrakes can you please make it so that the thumbnail of the game has the current version written on it.
Roderick is such a fancy name, I love it.
Note. The update will be delayed for a few days. Hang on tight till then. >:^)
Is there any NSFW content in this visual novel as of yet
As far as I know there isnt yet.
Coffee or Tea ?
11/10!! I love the VN so far, can't wait for the next update.
Coffee
Tea
I can't choose a single route to settle with. I'm just doing everyone's routes simultaneously. They all so loveable and I'm simping for everyone lol.
I love Dave so much and I need more of him ;-;
when is the next update? You put out great content and I'm hungry
Best Visual Novel. 11/10. <3
This is so far the best visual novel i've ever played after Lagoon Lounge. Keep it up ilysm 🥺✨❤️
Hey Drakes I want ask if it is ok to color one of your CG and send u or something? I really liked your vn and I want to try to help u a little bit even if u will reject the final efect I wouldn't mind :) If you don't want me to do that I just won't do that. Thanks for answer! :)
Sure! Feel free to colour it in. I can't promise that I'll be using it but who knows, right? Be sure to send me over the DM in discord if you've decided to. ^^
Take care and thanks for playing.
-D
Ok! Thank you for reply! Im not too good to drawing backgrounds but I will try my best! Im still learning >,< u are acually first one who im gonna colour/draw something for someone ;D
Have a good Day buddy! :)
Hey i have a small question about instaklling the new update- im on a windows pc and after downloading the 1.05 and extracting the .zip, then putting it in the game folder i have for limits, i tried loading m y save from the last version since i didnt finish it before the update and it said an exception has occured or error- and now its making me restart everything with no skip option- im gonna try re downloading it but please help!
Hello, due to the early development of the builds, Save files aren't guaranteed to survive after passing build. (I try to make sure that it stays working.) If you go to 'Preferences' and under the Skip column, select 'Unseen Texts' and you should then be able to skip forward.
Thanks for playing, take care.
-D
Coffee or Tea?~
the most important decision in the game. it affects the whole plot
Damn this update was so good that now Roderick lives in my head rent free !!!
Hey Drakes I just ask This New If I Wait Lion I and Bear Death?? I Like 1. 00-1.041 the Storyline this games it's amazing 👍
Thank you for the love of god! Very muchhhhhh
Hey Drakes I just want to ask if the game will still be free when you complete it or will we have to buy the final product when its available?
It was free, still is, and will continue to be. ^^
Thanks for playing, Take care.
-D
Look, I'm absolutely SIMPing Piere with every fiber of my being, I have no shame in that, but I would still like to call him out for moving-the-goalpost on giving MC info about his dad. Seriously, he keeps brining up that MC is the "Son of Yorke" and going out of his way to bring up dad, but then refuses to share any of the information we actually want to know...
He's super wishy-washy on whether or not he can actually talk about MC's dad or not! First, he brings up MC's dad and even shows us a picture of him, citing that he's certain that we are the "Son of Yorke" after having met us, then turns around and says he can't say anything more because we aren't "VeRiFiEd" as his son; then, the following day, he continues to bring up MC's dad and dangling the promise of information in front of his face after the DNA test, only to switch gears and say that he "ThInKs It Is StIlL tOo EaRlY fOr ThAt" and "HaS tO aSk HiS sUpErIoRs" before he can tell us anything once we actually have the DNA verification. That's all kinds of suspicious, to me... =_= (
...even if he is attractive...)On a less exasperated note, Roderick is absolutely adorable and the goodest of boys! That little "wruff" he does is really cute; my childhood dog would do the same thing whenever she didn't want to do something, like a little puppy tantrum. What I'm saying is, though I'm a total SIMP for Piere, I would protect Roderick with my life! And you can quote me on that!
Great work, as always! Looking forward to the next build already!
most of us simp Pierre
Is Roderick a love interest or nah? And when do each route start?
Yes. Roderick is a love interest. The beginning of each route should start after the current in-game day.
Thanks for playing!
-D
It's was so hard for me to choose just one route. So I made one for each character.