Definitely continue this its really a breath of fresh air from the now too many vns of horror genre that keep popping up, I love the characters especially the dragon and very much hope you continue this
I really enjoyed this. However, it really took me for a loop. Things felt like they moved way to quickly to start out with.I noticed multiple spots with great timing for a good laugh. Can't wait to see just how far this could go!
I was joking! Tora is like the most famous tiger furry out there, besides the Nekojishi tigers, Ticer and Dash Tiger. Why wouldn't I compare him to other tiger furries? Your username implies that you can take a joke, but clearly I was wrong. If you don't like Torahiko you could just say so.
I enjoyed the first demo! Keep going, I really liked the choices and backstory behind it. The only constructive criticism I had is the font, I'll admit it took me few minutes to adjust and started reading right away.
Such lovely visual novel, I want to read more! I look forward to your progress. <3
HOLY MOLY this VN is impressive! The soundtrack herevery is GORGEOUS.
I really can't put into words how much i love the sounds youve chosen. <3 <3
As someone who is working with ren.py currently the UI and backgrounds are fantastic. The backgrounds have a consistent style and they are visually interesting as they are. (A lot of devs use a very basic filter effect and poorly implement it. These effects are so well done here. They wouldn't look out of place in a big budget game.)
Overall I really like the story and the direction its going. The writing was good and your character sprites are very very nice looking. I've finished the story content you've written so far and I've got so many questions... I want to know more haha.
The font you've chosen for the dialogue screen was a little difficult to read in some of the longer lines. I really appreciate it's stylistic effect, and it definitely makes your VN stand out from others. Some of the longer sentences or paragraphs could probably benefit from being broken up into seperate lines. This makes it easier to digest.
I really hope you get the attention you deserve for this demo! I'm really impressed. Fingers crossed you'll think about releasing an update soon! :)
Thank you! I don't know how I feel being compared to a big budget game haha but thanks nonetheless. As for the font, honestly I simply picked one that looked sorta look a bit funky. Poor decision on my part yeah? I'll consider replacing it with something more managable '^_^. Thanks for your other feedbacks, I'll keep it in mind.
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Amazing start! I hope to see the next update
I'm currently working on updates, so sit tight.
Thanks for checking the demo out!
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im already liking the direction of the storie cant wait for more
Thanks for visiting, hope you enjoyed the demo!
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Thanks! I'm glad that people are liking the character assets, I was a bit anxious since I made them myself ^^.
Hope you enjoyed the short demo.
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Oh I did! I'm curious where the story goes from here, what sort of... powers do orb users have and what does it even mean to be an orb user.
Good job for your work, Hope to see more of the visual novel in future.
Thank you. I'm already working on continuing the story and doing some adjustments. Hope you had a decent time testing the demo out!
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Definitely continue this its really a breath of fresh air from the now too many vns of horror genre that keep popping up, I love the characters especially the dragon and very much hope you continue this
Thank you for checking the demo out! Hope you enjoyed it. I'm a fan of the dragon myself :)
Cheers,
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dude the music is pretty chill. nice...
oh... and theres this orbs i wonder if magic exist in this world... interesting
wow, a good start and I'm looking forward to the update!
Hold on to your seat then! Because I'm working on it.
Thanks for checking the demo out!
-D
I really enjoyed this. However, it really took me for a loop. Things felt like they moved way to quickly to start out with.I noticed multiple spots with great timing for a good laugh. Can't wait to see just how far this could go!
Is the pacing a bit too fast? I'll see what I can do to make the novel more seamless. No promises though! ;)
Regardless, thanks for trying the demo!
-D
Mmmm yes, buff tiger content
aka Torahiko content^^ just more mature? I haven't played it yet, so I can't know...
Not every tiger is Torahiko
I was joking! Tora is like the most famous tiger furry out there, besides the Nekojishi tigers, Ticer and Dash Tiger. Why wouldn't I compare him to other tiger furries? Your username implies that you can take a joke, but clearly I was wrong. If you don't like Torahiko you could just say so.
(Btw. very helpful comment you got there...)
I enjoyed the first demo! Keep going, I really liked the choices and backstory behind it. The only constructive criticism I had is the font, I'll admit it took me few minutes to adjust and started reading right away.
Such lovely visual novel, I want to read more! I look forward to your progress. <3
Yeah, the font decision was kinda poor on my part. I'll consider changing it though! Thanks for checking it out,
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yay! another vn! haha yes yes spoil me with furries
Hope you enjoyed the short demo!
yep. really enjoyed it
My collection list reached 100 but I moved one game to the list only of furry games. So the novels, comic and text list down to 99 again. I think.
Nice that this one is compatible with android.
Maybe I should do another list only with Novels playable in android.
HOLY MOLY this VN is impressive! The soundtrack herevery is GORGEOUS.
I really can't put into words how much i love the sounds youve chosen. <3 <3
As someone who is working with ren.py currently the UI and backgrounds are fantastic. The backgrounds have a consistent style and they are visually interesting as they are. (A lot of devs use a very basic filter effect and poorly implement it. These effects are so well done here. They wouldn't look out of place in a big budget game.)
Overall I really like the story and the direction its going. The writing was good and your character sprites are very very nice looking. I've finished the story content you've written so far and I've got so many questions... I want to know more haha.
The font you've chosen for the dialogue screen was a little difficult to read in some of the longer lines. I really appreciate it's stylistic effect, and it definitely makes your VN stand out from others. Some of the longer sentences or paragraphs could probably benefit from being broken up into seperate lines. This makes it easier to digest.
I really hope you get the attention you deserve for this demo! I'm really impressed. Fingers crossed you'll think about releasing an update soon! :)
Thank you! I don't know how I feel being compared to a big budget game haha but thanks nonetheless. As for the font, honestly I simply picked one that looked sorta look a bit funky. Poor decision on my part yeah? I'll consider replacing it with something more managable '^_^. Thanks for your other feedbacks, I'll keep it in mind.
Hope you enjoyed the short demo! Cheers
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